When something
isn't selling online, people
automatically start assuming
things like, Internet businesses
never make any money, or, my
product/service just isn't
in-demand. What I tell people
when they come to me with these
statements is that there are
numerous reasons why their
product/service might not be
selling, and that they should
explore other options. For
instance, have they taken a good
look at their web copy lately?
Most of the time, the people I
talk to about their web
businesses are selling a good
product or service that people
would want to buy. However, what
stands in their way is often
their web copy, or lack thereof.
I often hear people say, Nobody
reads on the Internet, so my copy
just isn't that important. I want
to amend that claim to this: Many
people don't read on the
Internet, but those who are
looking to purchase a product or
service always do.
In today's rocky economy, people
aren't willing to throw money at
a product/service they know
nothing about. Many online
shoppers spend hours looking for
the item that is exactly what
they want. Your product/service
could be exactly what they're
looking for, but with scant,
uninformative copy, how are they
going to know?
So it's time to make a few
changes, nothing too painful. You
don't have to throw out your old
copy and start from scratch. With
some minor alterations, your copy
can inform, motivate and charge
prospects to take action and buy.
Here are a few changes you can
make to change the way your copy
sells:
Give the Most Important Info
First -- Don't force people
to wade through two pages of copy
before they can discover what
you're all about. Get to the
point right up front, in the
headline, subheading, and first
few paragraphs. If you have too
much filler copy in the beginning
and don't start getting to the
point until later, all that copy
your visitors read will be lost
on them. It will have been out of
context because you didn't
provide them with a context.
First Things First -- Ever
head of "Inverted Pyramid
Style" writing? It means
starting with the most important
sentence and following with
lesser sentences. But not too
many. Keep your paragraphs short
so they don't overwhelm the
reader.
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Cut Words
-- Web copy should use about half
the word count or less than
conventional writing, so keep it
short and too the point. This
isn't the great American novel.
Your goal is to make sure your
audience can understand every
word you say while reading
quickly. If they have to stop to
get a dictionary because you used
too many cryptic words or jargon,
you'll lose their interest.
No Sub Par Subheadings --
Use only meaningful subheadings.
Your subheadings should serve as
an outline for your copy, making
it easier for the reader to
remember important points and
gain and accurate overview of the
products or services. If your
subheadings are well-placed and
meaningful, no one should have to
read your copy twice.
One Idea Per Paragraph --
Don't load your paragraphs with
ideas. Avoid confusing the reader
by separating each idea into its
own paragraph. This will also
help you keep paragraphs shorter.
Limiting paragraphs to one idea
helps readers digest information
a little at a time, promoting
comprehension and recall.
Use Bullets -- When
presenting information, it is
helpful to separate the text with
bullet points. Bulleted lists are
easier to read than entire
paragraphs, and the
differentiation shows readers
that they should pay special
attention to bulleted points. In
fact, readers are known for
skipping over paragraphs and
going straight for the bulleted
text, so make whatever
information is in bullets
essential to motivating the sale.
Highlight Keywords --
You're going to get a lot of
ìscannersî visiting your site.
These are people who don't read
word for word, but glance over
text looking or important
information. Highlight keywords
so they will know where to find
this information.
Use Hype Where Hype is Needed
-- Hype is like opera. People
either love it or loathe it. So
be careful where you use it. With
certain products, hype has been
known to reduce credibility, but
with others, it increases
excitement and motivates
purchases. But if you want to add
that punch here and there in your
copy, use hype like paprika; just
a pinch to tweak the flavor. An
exclamation point here, a phrase
in caps there, and you've got
just enough to satisfy any
palate.
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